Black Ops: 2

[Bruhhh 30]

As we all know at E3 2012. Treyarch and Activision announced the yearly Call of Duty game Call of Duty: Black Ops 2.

Some critics are saying well this game will be like the original Black Ops, but Activision and Treyarch say that will all of the changes they have made to the Campaign, Zombies and multiplayer that this game will blow the roof off compared to the previous installment of the series.

The Campaign in Black Ops 2 will take place in two different points of time. One will be in the 1960’s and 1970’s with Alex Mason Returning as the main character or protagonist, where he will be fighting covert ops missions for the United States in the Cold War. But most of the game’s timeline and setting will occur in the year 2025, where Alex Mason’s grandson will be fighting a Nicaraguan Narco-terrorist, Raul Menendez. Who's entire plot is to bring the economic and defensive states of Russia, China and The United States down.

Zombies is the Call of Duty franchises most popular game type. As most everyone knows Zombies is the game type Tthat is Co-Op compatible or playable in Single Player. One of the main differences between this type of Zombies is that now you can play with 8 people instead of 4. Along with the new improvements to the guns and maps, Zombies should turn out to be a fantastic addition to make Black Ops 2 awesome,

In developing Black Ops 2, Treyarch introduced several revisions to the gameplay mechanics for online multiplayer that have been a key importance in the Call of Duty franchise. One of these revisions and additions is a “Multi Team†gametype, where several teams can join the fighting. Another big addition is the newly revised the Custom Class section will be made with more revisions such as new character customization. Also the "Kill Streak" function, which gives players in-game rewards for killing other players, has been revised as well and will now be known as "Score Streaks". This just means in addition to get a reward for killing an enemy you also get a reward for securing an objective. Such as a flag or a bomb.

Although the original Black Ops had a good and bad reputation as a game, I am assured that Black Ops 2 will be the best of the franchise and make ground breaking advances in game making.

Call of Duty: Black Ops 2 will be released on November 13, 2012. Check out more of Treyarch's new game over on the

Black Ops 2 homepage.

[KSI Ace 7 97]

As we all know at E3 2012 Treyarch and Activision announced the yearly Call of Duty game, Call of Duty: Black Ops 2. (Always use the game's full name the first time)

Some critics are saying this game will be like the original Black Ops, but Activision and Treyarch say that with all of the changes they have made to the campaign, zombies and multiplayer that this game will blow the roof off in comparison to the previous installment. (Just something I thought might add some spice)

The plot in Black Ops 2 will be split into two different points in time.(<-Setting almost sounded like an "option") The first will begin in the 1960’s with Alex Mason returning as the protagonist. He will be fighting in covert ops for the United States in the Cold War. But most of the game’s timeline and setting will occur in the year 2025, with Alex Mason’s Grandson fighting a Nicaraguan Narco-terrorist, Raul Menendez. Menedez's entire plan is to bring the economic and defensive states of Russia, China and the United States to their(multiple possessives) knees.

Everyone loves to play Call of Duty’s(Maybe switch to "Black Ops" since it's only in those installments) most famous gametype(Says misspelled but used like this in games), zombies. As most everyone knows the zombie gametype is both Co-op compatible and playable in singleplayer. But the main difference between this type of Zombies and the version in the previous installment is that now you can play with up to eight people instead of four. Along with the new improvements to the weapons and maps, zombies will surely be a fantastic addition to make Black Ops 2 awesome.

In developing Black Ops 2, Treyarch introduced several revisions to the gameplay mechanics of multiplayer that have been key additions within the Call of Duty franchise. One of these upgrades is the “Multi-Team†gametype, where several teams can fight against each other, instead of having only two teams going at it. The custom class section will also be made over with more changes such as new character customization. Also the "Kill Streak" feature, which gives players in-game rewards for killing other players, has likewise been upgraded and will now be known as "Score Streaks". This just means in addition to receiving a reward for killing an enemy you also get a reward for securing an objective, such as a flag, a bomb, etc.

Although the original Black Ops had a mixed reputation as a game, I am sure that Black Ops 2 will be the best of the franchise and make ground breaking advances in game development.

(I always try to add something at the end to make the reader want to do more research, something as simple as giving them a link to the game's site)

Call of Duty: Black Ops 2 will be released on November 13, 2012. Check out more of Treyarch's new game over on the

Black Ops 2 homepage.

Note: You could probably get away with capitalizing "Zombies" and "Campaign" but I usually don't unless it has a specific name...like Zombies.

[Sungazer's Wife 6]

Why did you ignore these edits?

[Bruhhh 30]

i didnt i added them

[Sungazer's Wife 6]

http://www.ksiglobal...ty-black-ops-2/

When comparing your first initial post to the blog post, Badfur and I found them nearly if not entirely identicle.

A few examples: there's a period near the beginning of your article (both published and unpublished) that shouldn't be there, it isn't The United States of America, it's the United States of America, there's the word who's taken out in Odin's edit, while you still retain it.

This is all a learning process, and we are all here to learn from it and become better writers.

[Badfur 13]

From the front page.

"As we all know at E3 2012. Treyarch and Activision announced the yearly Call of Duty game Call of Duty: Black Ops 2" There should be a period at the end of this sentence. Ace put it there in the revision, it is not there on the front page.

"Some critics are saying well this game will be like the original Black Ops, But Activision and Treyarch" Why is the B in 'But' capitalized? It's the middle of a sentence.

"One will be in the 1960’s and 1970’s with Alex Mason Returning as the main character or protagonist, Where he will be fighting covert ops missions for the United States in the Cold War. But most of the game’s timeline and setting will occur in the year 2025, where Alex Mason’s Grandson will be fighting a Nicaraguan Narco-terrorist, Raul Menendez." Capital R in returning, why? You put a comma and then next word with a capital letter. Really? "Alex Mason's Grandson" the g in grandson should not be capitalized.

"Everyone loves to play Call of Duty’s most famous game type, Zombies." Really? I do not like to play Zombies, I know a couple others that don't as well. Clearly we are not a part of 'everyone' it seems.

"But what’s the main difference between this type of Zombies is that now you can play with 8 people instead of 4." Saying 'what's' implies you are asking a question (putting aside the fact you started a sentence with 'But'). There is no question mark, and that isn't even phrased like a question. Remove the word entirely.

"Along with the new improvements to the Guns and Maps, Zombies ought to be a fantastic addition to make Black Ops 2 awesome" There is no period at the end of the sentence. You capitalized the G and M in guns and maps. That comma should be a semi-colon, in my opinion. 'Zombies ought (who uses that word, anyway?) to be a fantastic addition to Black Ops 2.' That is it. Saying that it will be an addition to make it awesome is wordy, largely unnecesary, and the sentence doesn't really make sense.

"One of these revisions and additions is a “Multi Team†gametype, Where several teams can join the fighting." Why the capital W?

"Also the Custom Class section will be made with more revisions such as new character customization. Also the “Kill Streak†function, which gives players in-game rewards for killing other players, has likewise been revised and will now be known as “Score Streaksâ€." Also should not be used in that manner. You put the same word at the beginning of back to back sentences. While that is possible to do, and is fine in many cases, the word you used is 'Also'. Also should not start back to back sentences. It makes the article sound terrible, in my opinion.

"This just means in addition to get a reward for killing an enemy you also get a reward for securing an objective. Such as a flag, a bomb, etc." That should all be one sentence. 'Such as a flag, a bomb, etc.' is not a sentence. If you were to write that, it would be 'such as a flag, bomb, or other objective.' Using 'etc.' is nice, but when you only list two items before it, it makes the sentence feel out of place. After objective, make that period a comma, and then use a lowercase 's' in such.

[Bruhhh 30]

edited 1:15 in the flippin morning please if there are any edits please hold them till tommorow

[Badfur 13]

As we all know at E3 2012. Treyarch and Activision announced the yearly Call of Duty game Call of Duty: Black Ops 2.

Some critics are saying well this game will be like the original Black Ops, but Activision and Treyarch say that will with all of the changes they have made to the Campaign campaign, Zombies and multiplayer that this game will blow the roof off [of what?] compared to the previous installment of the series.

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Besides the entire paragraph being one sentence, it feels far too long and is too wordy. You "blow the roof off" of something. Something has to have a roof to begin with in order for you to blow it off. You make no direction of where the sentence is going and then just skip to comparing the invisible house that now lacks a roof, to a game series. Consider rewording that sentence, make it shorter, rotate words around a bit.

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The Campaign campaign in Black Ops 2 will take place in two different points of time. One will be in the 1960’s and 1970’s with Alex Mason Returning returning as the main character or protagonist, where he will be fighting covert ops missions for the United States in the Cold War. But most Most of the game’s timeline and setting will occur in the year 2025, where Alex Mason’s grandson will be fighting a Nicaraguan Narco-terrorist, Raul Menendez. Who's entire plot is [You just put a period in the middle of a sentence. You can't just continue the sentence like nothing happened. Something needs to go here to start the next sentence.] to bring the economic and defensive states [having states here and then saying United States is repetitive, consider an alternate word.] of Russia, China and The the United States down.

Zombies is the Call of Duty franchise's most popular game type. As most everyone knows Zombies is the game type Tthat that is Co-Op compatible or playable in Single Player. One of the main differences between this type of Zombies is that now you can play with 8 people instead of 4. [Normally, any number below 10 should be written out, eight and four, not 8 and 4. However, in this case, I do feel it fits the situation.] Along with the new improvements to the guns and maps, Zombies should turn out to be a fantastic addition to make Black Ops 2 awesome, [You clearly ignored what I said about this sentence. Please refer to previous edits for how I feel about it.]

In developing Black Ops 2, Treyarch introduced several revisions to the gameplay mechanics for online multiplayer online multiplayer gameplay mechanics that have been a key importance in the Call of Duty franchise. One of these revisions and additions is a “Multi Team†gametype, where several teams can join the fighting. Another big addition is the newly revised the Custom Class section; it has been will be remade with more revisions with improvements to several areas, most notably such as new character customization. Also the The "Kill Streak" function, which gives players in-game rewards for killing other players, has been revised as well, and will now be known as "Score Streaks". This just means in addition to getting a reward for killing an enemy, you also get a reward for securing an objective; . Such as a flag or a bomb. such as a flag, or a bomb.

Although the original Black Ops had a good and bad mixed reputation as a game, I am assured that Black Ops 2 will be the best of the franchise and make ground breaking advances in game making.

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