Richard Sherman Outrage

[Fifth Kazekage 149]

​ Many people enjoy the pleasures of American football as we know it today. Sometimes however, certain actions catch the attention of any person, football fan or not. Recently Richard Sherman most definitely met the standard for attention grabbing.

Most of you might know of the interview that occurred post-game after the Seahawks beat the 49ers to advance to the Super Bowl as Richard Sherman exploded on interview. As reporters asked questions, Richard retaliated by hollering out like a mongol. A memorable quote from the interview by Sherman was "don't you ever talk about me!". What do you guys think? Was Sherman in the right? In his defense, well you're talking to a man full of energy after he sent his team to the Super Bowl; What can you expect? Or maybe on the flip side of things no, his actions were unruly and disrespectable. Let me know what you think in the comments below!

http://youtu.be/yjOkTib5eVQ

http://www.forbes.com/sites/tommytomlinson/2014/01/19/22-brief-thoughts-about-that-richard-sherman-interview/ (this website got me thinking)

Author: KSI Kazekage

I can provide more debating points if needed, or add on to length.

[Trainer Shivah 157]

I recommend adding onto the length. Many people enjoy the pleasures of American football as we know it today. Sometimes however, (However, sometimes) certain actions catch the attention of any person (suggestion: I'd change this to anyone), football fan or not. Recently, Richard Sherman most definitely met the standard for attention grabbing. Most of you might (may) know of the (Richard Sherman's) interview that occurred post-game(post-game is redundant if you say it occurred after the game) after the Seahawks beat the 49ers to advance to the Super Bowl was Richard Sherman exploded on interview. As reporters asked questions, Richard retaliated by hollering out like a mongol. A memorable quote from the interview by Sherman was, "Don't you ever talk about me!". What do you guys think? Was Sherman in the right? (These sentences should be moved towards the end of the paragraph, before the last sentence.) In his defense, well (they were) talking to a man full of energy after he sent his team to the Super Bowl;(.) What can you expect? Or maybe on the flip side of things no,¹ his actions were unruly and disrespectable (disrespectful). Let me know what you think in the comments below! [1.] Or maybe on the flip side of things no, This phrase needs to be reworded. Try something like "On the flip side of things,"

[Fifth Kazekage 149]

Many people enjoy the pleasures of American football as we know it today. However, certain actions catch the attention of anyone, football fan or not. Recently, Richard Sherman definitely met the standard for attention grabbing.
Most of you may know of Richard Sherman’s interview that occurred after the Seahawks beat the 49ers to advance to the Super Bowl as Richard Sherman exploded on interview. As reporters asked questions, Richard retaliated by hollering out like a mongol. A memorable quote from the interview by Sherman was "don't you ever talk about me!". Was Sherman in the right? In his defense, well you're talking to a man full of energy after he sent his team to the Super Bowl; What can you expect? He even apologized to the people he could have offended. To add on, he also said “I probably shouldn’t have done that. I regret doing that,†On the flip side of things no, his actions were unruly and disrespectful. No matter what side you are on, consider this quote “If you catch me in the moment on the field when I am still in that zone, when I'm still as competitive as I can be and I'm trying to be in the place where I have to be to do everything I can to be successful ... and help my team win, then it’s not going to come out as articulate, as smart, as charismatic - because on the field I'm not all those things,â€
What do you guys think? Do quotes like this change your opinion; is this honesty? Let me know what you think in the comments below!
Video- http://youtu.be/yjOkTib5eVQ
http://www.nydailynews.com/sports/football/seahawks-sherman-explains-rant-cnn-interview-article-1.1587285
http://www.forbes.com/sites/tommytomlinson/2014/01/19/22-brief-thoughts-about-that-richard-sherman-interview/

[Trainer Shivah 157]

Many people enjoy the pleasures of American football as we know it today. However, certain actions catch the attention of anyone, football fan or not. Recently, Richard Sherman definitely met the standard for attention grabbing.
Most of you may know of Richard Sherman’s interview that occurred after the Seahawks beat the 49ers to advance to the Super Bowl as Richard Sherman (he) exploded on interview. As reporters asked questions, Richard retaliated by hollering out like a mongol. A memorable quote from the interview by Sherman was, "Don't you ever talk about me!". Was Sherman in the right? In his defense, well you're talking to a man full of energy after he sent his team to the Super Bowl; (change semicolon to a peroid)  What can you expect? He even apologized to the people he could have offended. To add on, He also said, â€œI probably shouldn’t have done that. I regret doing that,(change comma to a period)†On the flip side of things no, his actions were unruly and disrespectful. No matter what side you are on, consider this quote. â€œIf you catch me in the moment on the field when I am still in that zone, when I'm still as competitive as I can be and I'm trying to be in the place where I have to be to do everything I can to be successful ... and help my team win, then it’s not going to come out as articulate, as smart, as charismatic - because on the field I'm not all those things.†(This sentence is a run-on. You're going to have to have to break it up with more punctuation.) 
What do you guys think? Do quotes like this change your opinion;(change to ?) Is this honesty? Let me know what you think in the comments below!

[Fifth Kazekage 149]

      Many people enjoy the pleasures of American football as we know it today. However, certain actions catch the attention of anyone, football fan or not. Recently, Richard Sherman definitely met the standard for attention grabbing.

      Most of you may know of Richard Sherman’s interview that occurred after the Seahawks beat the 49ers to advance to the Super Bowl as he exploded on interview. As reporters asked questions, Richard retaliated by hollering out like a mongol. A memorable quote from the interview by Sherman was, "Don't you ever talk about me!". Was Sherman in the right? In his defense, you're talking to a man full of energy after he sent his team to the Super Bowl. What can you expect? He even apologized to the people he could have offended. To add on, He also said, “I probably shouldn’t have done that. I regret doing that.†On the flip side of things, his actions were unruly and disrespectful. No matter what side you are on, consider this quote. “If you catch me in the moment on the field when I am still in that zone, I'm still as competitive as I can be. I'm trying to be in the place where I have to be to do everything I can to be successful and help my team win. Then it’s not going to come out as articulate, as smart, as charismatic - because on the field I'm not all those things.†What do you guys think? Do quotes like this change your opinion? Is this honesty? Let me know what you think in the comments below

[Trainer Shivah 157]

Alright, looks good! Go ahead and post a new topic in the Community News with the final draft. (:

At the bottom of the post, write "Author: Fourth Kazekage"

[Fifth Kazekage 149]

Alright thanks a lot!