Khaleesi 213 Posted October 28, 2013 Report Share Posted October 28, 2013 Hope After searching and surfing the Internet as I normally do many Friday nights, I came across an interesting website. Here, people would offer their opinions on what feelings and emotions meant to them. After hearing many sob stories and tales of over coming obstacles, I wondered what our own little community thought. And so I began, searching the land of adventurous gamers, curious as to what lay inside their brilliant brains. After receiving dozens upon dozens of replies, I've gathered that the word hope means a lot of different things to a lot of different people. Hope is an emotion most people either cling to in desperation or celebrate with happiness. “Hold on, pain ends.†Was told to me, as an acronym of the word Hope. It seems like hope is something we can all hold onto, even in the darkest of times. Hope is always there, as long as we choose to believe in it. Hope will guide you, help you, and give you something to believe in. “When I think of hope, I get all warm and fuzzy on the inside and it just brings a smile across my face.†Another definition of the word hope, told by another member. Hope is something to be celebrated, to be excited about. Hope is available to everyone, whether they know it or not. Hope is that little voice inside your head murmuring, “Give it a try†when the whole world is screaming “noâ€. It seems like we could all use hope sometimes. Hope is being able to find that shimmer of light even when our world is filled with darkness. It’s important to remember that anything is possible in life; we just have to have a little hope. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4mCWiAylPfk ~KSI ToxicRain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
Badfur 13 Posted October 28, 2013 Report Share Posted October 28, 2013 After searching and surfing the internet as I normally do many Friday nights, I came across an interesting website. Here, people would offer their opinions on what feelings and emotions meant to them. After hearing many sob stories and tales of overcoming obstacles, I wondered what our own little community thought. And So I began, searching the land of adventurous gamers, curious as to what lay inside their brilliant brains. After receiving dozens upon dozens of replies, I've gathered that the word hope means a lot of different things to a lot of different people. Hope is an emotion most people either cling to in desperation or celebrate with happiness. “Hold on, pain ends;†this was told to me, as an acronym of the word 'hope'. It seems like hope is something we can all hold onto, even in the darkest of times. Hope is always there, as long as we choose to believe in it. Hope will guide you, help you, and give you something to believe in. “When I think of hope, I get all warm and fuzzy on the inside and it just brings a smile across my face.†Another definition of the word hope, told by another member. Hope is something to be celebrated, to be excited about. Hope is available to everyone, whether they know it or not. Hope is that little voice inside your head murmuring, “give it a try†when the whole world is screaming “noâ€. It seems like we could all use hope sometimes. Hope is being able to find that shimmer of light even when our world is filled with darkness. It’s important to remember that anything is possible in life; we just have to have a little hope. [Try to keep the fonts the same. I suggest, before you post, selecting everything and choosing a font that suits the article. In many cases, Verdana is a good choice, it's easy to read.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
Khaleesi 213 Posted October 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2013 Hope After searching and surfing the Internet as I normally do many Friday nights, I came across an interesting website. Here, people would offer their opinions on what feelings and emotions meant to them. After hearing many sob stories and tales of overcoming obstacles, I wondered what our own little community thought. So I began, searching the land of adventurous gamers, curious as to what lay inside their brilliant brains. After receiving dozens upon dozens of replies, I've gathered that the word hope means a lot of different things to a lot of different people. Hope is an emotion most people either cling to in desperation or celebrate with happiness. “Hold on, pain ends;†this was told to me as an acronym of the word "hope". It seems like hope is something we can all hold onto, even in the darkest of times. Hope is always there, as long as we choose to believe in it. Hope will guide you, help you, and give you something to believe in. “When I think of hope, I get all warm and fuzzy on the inside and it just brings a smile across my face.†Another definition of the word hope, told by another member. Hope is something to be celebrated, to be excited about. Hope is available to everyone, whether they know it or not. Hope is that little voice inside your head murmuring, “give it a try†when the whole world is screaming “noâ€. It seems like we could all use hope sometimes. Hope is being able to find that shimmer of light even when our world is filled with darkness. It’s important to remember that anything is possible in life; we just have to have a little hope. http://www.youtube.c...h?v=4mCWiAylPfk Changes have been made Thank you! ~KSI ToxicRain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
Badfur 13 Posted October 29, 2013 Report Share Posted October 29, 2013 So I began, searching the land Remove the comma. Reason being, as it is now, it should be able to be read as 'So I began curious as to what lay inside their brilliant brains.' Who's brains? The gamers, which is why removing the first comma makes the middle part less of an aside, and more of a part of the sentence. 'So I began searching the land...' fits with what you are trying to convey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
Khaleesi 213 Posted October 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2013 Hope After searching and surfing the Internet as I normally do many Friday nights, I came across an interesting website. Here, people would offer their opinions on what feelings and emotions meant to them. After hearing many sob stories and tales of overcoming obstacles, I wondered what our own little community thought. So I began searching the land of adventurous gamers, curious as to what lay inside their brilliant brains. After receiving dozens upon dozens of replies, I've gathered that the word hope means a lot of different things to a lot of different people. Hope is an emotion most people either cling to in desperation or celebrate with happiness. “Hold on, pain ends;†this was told to me as an acronym of the word "hope". It seems like hope is something we can all hold onto, even in the darkest of times. Hope is always there, as long as we choose to believe in it. Hope will guide you, help you, and give you something to believe in. “When I think of hope, I get all warm and fuzzy on the inside and it just brings a smile across my face.†Another definition of the word hope, told by another member. Hope is something to be celebrated, to be excited about. Hope is available to everyone, whether they know it or not. Hope is that little voice inside your head murmuring, “give it a try†when the whole world is screaming “noâ€. It seems like we could all use hope sometimes. Hope is being able to find that shimmer of light even when our world is filled with darkness. It’s important to remember that anything is possible in life; we just have to have a little hope. http://www.youtube.c...h?v=4mCWiAylPfk Changes have been made once again! Hopefully all done now. ~KSI ToxicRain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
Badfur 13 Posted October 30, 2013 Report Share Posted October 30, 2013 Looks good, publish it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
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