God 17 Posted April 13, 2013 Report Share Posted April 13, 2013 KSI now has a Game Fan Shop! The Game Fan Shop has a wide variety of products to purchase such as Microsoft Points to PC Games and DLC Content. Everyone can get a 5% discount on their purchase(s) with the code "KSIGlobal". Purchasing items from the shop is currently equivalent to donating. You can visit the shop by looking towards the top of the webpage and and you should click the "Fan Shop" tab which will then re-direct you to the website. Another way to visit the Shop is is by going here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
Badfur 13 Posted April 13, 2013 Report Share Posted April 13, 2013 KSI now has a Game Fan Shop! The Game Fan Shop has a wide variety of products to purchase such as Microsoft Points, to PC Games and Downloadable Content. DLC Content. Everyone can get a 5% discount on their purchase(s) with the code "KSIGlobal". Purchasing items from the shop is currently equivalent to donating. You can visit the shop by looking towards the top of the webpage and and you should click the "Fan Shop" tab which will then re-direct you to the website. Another way to visit the Shop is is by going here. Overall, pretty solid. If you are going to say 'such as', follow it with X, Y, and Z. Alternatively, you can do something from A to B. So, 'from Microsoft Points to Downloadable Content' or 'such as Microsoft Points, PC Games, and Downloadable Content.' As I've said before, the first time you introduce something, write it all out. So, it'd be 'Downloadable Content' not 'DLC'. Also, don't write 'DLC Content' as that is redundant and wrong. 'Downloadable Content Content'? Really? No. Overall pretty solid. Oh, and make sure the period at the end is the appropriate color, not light blue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
God 17 Posted April 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2013 KSI now has a Game Fan Shop! The Game Fan Shop has a wide variety of products to purchase such as Microsoft Points to PC Games and DLC Content. Everyone can get a 5% discount on their purchase(s) with the code "KSIGlobal". Purchasing items from the shop is currently equivalent to donating. You can visit the shop by looking towards the top of the webpage and and you should click the "Fan Shop" tab which will then re-direct you to the website. Another way to visit the Shop is is by going here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
Badfur 13 Posted April 13, 2013 Report Share Posted April 13, 2013 I do hope you are joking. You didn't change anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
God 17 Posted April 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2013 KSI now has a Game Fan Shop! The Game Fan Shop has a wide variety of products to purchase such as Microsoft Points, PC Games and Downloadable Content. Everyone can get a 5% discount on their purchase(s) with the code "KSIGlobal". Purchasing items from the shop is currently equivalent to donating. You can visit the shop by looking towards the top of the webpage and and you should click the "Fan Shop" tab which will then re-direct you to the website. Another way to visit the Shop is is by going here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
Badfur 13 Posted April 13, 2013 Report Share Posted April 13, 2013 Much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Awards
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